True Love

This is my first Critique so here it goes! I like how you show your true feelings in this poem. It is like the person reading the poem can all feel the same feelings that you are feeling.This poem is also very well done, and your use of things such as punctuation gives the reader the feeling that you are right there with the person you love,expressing your feelings towards that certain person. I love the layout of this poem! The poem was very well thought out and put together, making it a very unique piece of work.I really like how you made it so that I was able to imagine the poem being played out in real life,because of the technique you used in your poem.There are many of these types of poems out there, but this one had a larger impact on me than the rest. It made me think about that certain person I like <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> This poem had a huge impact on me and probably a lot of others who read this poem, because there are probably many people who feel the same way about the person they want to love.There isn't really anything negative I can say about this poem,because this poem had many good qualities in it.Every time I read this poem it gives me that warm fuzzy feeling inside. I would call this Poem a job well done <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>